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Thursday, March 13, 2014

Writing 1: Venus Chocolat

I used to write more. I really wanted to be a writer. Now I'm studying accounting. *sigh* Anyway, I want to psych myself up to write again so I figured I'd post some of my old intros to stories. I was always good at setting up the beginning (except for the one book that I actually finished). This is Venus Chocolat. Probably the best name I came up for a story anyway.

            If you ask most people what they hate most about their high school graduation, you’d usually get some stereotypical response.
            Like how stuffy the room is. I mean its bad enough that you have to sit in one room for like… four hours while you sweat half to death in your stupid rental gown. But, is it really necessary to turn the heat up so high? I mean, I swear they must have the temperature set at one-hundred and twenty fricken degrees. I mean, is it so hard to turn it down a notch? Try eighty? Ok, maybe that is asking a lot, but a good one-hundred wouldn’t be too bad.
            And another thing, can’t they bother to rent a hall with enough space to actually fit all the folding chairs in the room. Then you wouldn’t have to sit so goddamn close to the sweaty person next to you, where if you have my luck, would smell as well.
            Now, if that didn’t bother someone that much, they probably didn’t like how fricken long it took for them to call your name. I mean, there’s like eight hundred names. I get that they can’t do anything about that but that doesn’t change the fact that it totally sucks for the anxious students who just want to get the hell out of there.
            However – a minority of the students probably would answer that they hated all the sappy stuff. I mean, some people find looking at slideshows and hearing the valedictorian give a speech about the “great” times you had in high school completely and utterly useless. Because frankly, most of those people probably don’t remember half of their high school career. I swear, even the total geek freaks like sappy stuff, they may not have experienced the “great” times but you can bet they were watching it hopefully from the sidelines. It’s the stoner freaks that don’t give a shit about who homecoming queen was and how many games the football team won.
            There might be a few people who even grumble about their parents. A couple of people who complain their gowns were too tight or too loose or whatever. But me? I would have to say that my least favorite part was when they called my name. No, I don’t have stage fright. And no, I didn’t trip on my way up, or sneeze in the principle’s face. What bothered me the most is what had been bothering me since Kindergarten, when they first called attendance and read my name aloud to the class. Only this time, it was to a room of over a thousand people.
            My name is Sadie Harris. Just Sadie; Miss Harris; Sadie Harris. Now, I know some would say, what’s so wrong with that name? But just look at it. Sadie Harris. It’s so… dull, unimaginative… so boring. I mean, anyone can be a Sadie. And are you even aware on how many Harris’s there are in the world? 2,790,000 in the United States alone, that’s how much. I googled it. That means, that out of all those Harris’s, take a guess how many of them are named Sadie. My point proven. Anyone can be a Sadie, and anyone can be a Harris, making me, Sadie Harris, completely and originally unoriginal.
            Now – it wasn’t just that the name was boring. I mean, it’s so forgettable. Twenty years from now, it’s not like anyone’s gonna remember me for anything important. I mean, if I’m lucky, they’ll remember me as the girl that sat behind them in math class freshman year. But, only if I’m lucky.
            Even if I had an exotic name like… Venus Chocolát, it’s not like people would remember me as anything different. You see, I know in my heart that I am not a Sadie Harris, but because that is my name, people EXPECT me to be a Sadie Harris. So – I’ve been playing the part of Sadie Harris for as long as I can remember. Shy, nice, a tad introverted, friends with one or two girls; not a total geek but definitely not cheerleader material; and of course, pin straight light brown hair almost always in a ponytail. So – even if I had been named Venus Chocolát and acted the way I did, I might be the girl that sat in front of you in math class freshman year, but it’s not much different.
            Then again, if my name was Venus Chocolát, no way in hell would I act the way I have the past four years. If my name was Venus Chocolát and not Sadie Harris, instead of being just like, “Hi, I’m Venus.” Like I would with Sadie, I’d be all, “Hi, I’m Venus,” then after a moment be like, “Yea, Venus, as in the goddess of beauty.” How exotic would that make me? Not only would I have a totally original name, I’d also have ties to ancient Greece. I could have been born there or something so I’d talk with a light accent but not the scary I-Just-Immigrated-Here-From-Europe-And-I-Have-Trouble-Saying-Things-Like-How-Are-You?-And-What-Is-Your-Name?-And-Pronouncing-Things-Like-Super-Market-And-Pizza accent, more of a I’m-Totally-Sexy-And-Foreign-And-On-Weekends-I-Like-To-Tan-Topless-Because-That’s-How-They-Do-In-Europe accent. I would dye my hair a really dark brown and start going tanning. I’d wear designer jeans with camis from Target and totally make it work for me. I would have dark brown contacts and chew softly on the erasers of my pencils as I half-listened to the teacher drone on about US History. I would definitely be interesting, and I would definitely be remembered.
            But, my name is not Venus Chocolát. My name is Sadie, Sadie Harris. Sadie as in… Sadie. And every time I was reminded of this my heart would sink below sea level, which made no sense because even though we lived near Lake Michigan, it wasn't as if we were in the lowlands or anything. So when I heard Principle Oldham called my name I stifled a groan and took my diploma. Or my diploma holder. The actual diploma comes in the mail. It’s like they don’t trust us not to lose them. Which I guess is smart considering how full the lost and found gets after a week, but it’s one of those little things that could lead to bigger things that could lead to corruption. That’s also when I realized that I read far too many books. Only a person who has read hundreds of books about people overthrowing corrupt governments would think about conspiracy theories focused on diploma deliveries as they graduated high school.
            That’s another thing – Sadie likes to read a lot. And not normal girl books, more like epic books. Books on politics. Books based on real events but elaborated and slightly fictional. Most girls my age left the library with Gossip Girl or The Clique Books; I left with War and Peace, by Leo Tolstoy, or Swann’s Way, by Marcel Proust.
            As I sat back in the plastic chair that creaked, ever so slightly, under any amount of pressure added to it, I pondered what kind of books Venus Chocolát would read. Probably foreign books with worn covers that were in Czechoslovakian or something – because, of course, not only would Venus Chocolát speak English and Greek – She’d speak Czechoslovakian as well. French and Italian would also be pretty impressive. That’s it! If I were Venus Chocolát I’d be bilingual… well… bilingual times two point five.
            Damn – there’s dorky Sadie popping up again.
            I glanced into the cramped crowd of overeager parents and bored younger siblings slumping in their seats playing with legos or Barbies or whatever. Every single family looked exactly the same. The crying mother, the proud father, the obnoxious little brother or the little sister forced into a poufy dress she didn't like, it was all the same.
            The strange thing about crowds is that no matter how packed a place can be, no matter how full or crowded the football stands are, you know that it only takes thirty seconds or so to find your parents. Don’t deny it, it’s a fact of life.
            My eyes rested on my own set of guardians. I preferred to consider them as such because the Harris’s were, in my own mind, not my parents. A spirit like mine ready to be exposed and experience the exotic flavors of life did not come from John and Karen Harris. I am convinced that I must have been switched up in the hospital when I was born despite the fact that I look almost identical to Karen.
            John had his arms around Karen and she, of course, was in tears while my little brother, Jacob, was kneeling down probably playing with one of his trucks: a typical childlike past time that I never saw the joy in. When they noticed I had glanced in their direction, Karen waved enthusiastically and John nudged little Jacob to alert him of this momentous moment of me glancing their way.
            I smiled, as that was what was typically expected, and went back to my seat. As I glanced around the auditorium I saw nearly identical situations taking place and I began to wonder if anyone other than myself saw the pointlessness to it all. Then, I realized, most of my fellow students would grow up to be exactly like the families surrounding them. The commercial tears the sad smiles… that was what was in their future. ‘And in mine,’ I realized. Or at least that was where I was headed. Go to college, meet a nice guy, get married, pop out a couple kids, and then I’m my parents.
            In a way I’m sure that is every teenager’s worst nightmare, and if it’s not their parents they are worried about turning into. It is their aunt or their uncle or even an older cousin… I had to stop it, I couldn't turn out like them. And if I walked out of here with my diploma holder and spent the rest of the summer at a summer job and off to college, that would be my destiny. I had to do something, something exotic. Join the peace corps, run for office, backpack around Europe, who cared – I needed to break free. I needed to start fresh. And – suddenly – I realized with this new found freedom I was bestowing upon myself, I could be anyone I wanted.

            No longer would I be chained to the abominable persona of Sadie Harris.


Hmmmm. Not as bad as I thought it would be but definitely a little juvenile. More to come if I can't come up with any current ideas!!

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